That half-time Doomcore-esque drop literally gave me goosebumps. Great job with this one!

Great work!

Since you asked for a feedback, here's one from a fellow producer (not a professional though)

- Take out unnecessary low-end frequencies from leads. The extra space allows the kick and bass to be felt more in the mix. It also gives space for other elements you may want to add on your track.

- Regarding the saw lead, you may want to either remove or lower the volume (or velocity) of the lower notes as it appears to make the mix muddy.

- Layer the snare with a snappy one to give it more presence.

- Add chords in the background to improve your track's atmosphere.

That's all, and remember to create what you want to hear yourself!

I would've preferred having my skull fractured by a colorful egg but this is fine